You have a start, but you have a fair amount of work to turn this into a good final paper. For starters, make sure your first paragraph makes it clear that you are talking about homicide. Don’t bogged down in discussing “criminal behavior,” which is much too general. You’ve said a lot about theory, which is currently the strength of your paper. You need more on prevention and intervention. You have relatively little on that now. It does not just have to be prevention of murder, but prevention of serious violence. By the way, most mental health facilities do not use lobotomies to treat depression and schizophrenia. That’s very, very unusual. Be careful with claims like that. You can be careful by making sure you are using scholarly sources and not dipping into your own opinions.
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